This animation goes on far too long. There are only a couple of mildly humorous moments. I would not call it a comedy. It is also really slow. However, I don't want to be too hard on you as this is your first long animation. I thought the art was good and the animation was quite good. Good luck with your degree and future animations.
Thanks for the review. There are some improvements that could of been made. Thank you for the compliments too. :)
If it wasn't for the song at the end, this video would be blammed.
Thanks for your opinion.
I didn't know what you meant in your author comments until a while into the video when all the animations just stopped.
I'm not really sure how to score this video. If the video was complete, I'd probably give it at least an 8/10, but as it is, I think I'll give it a 6/10 as the first half is still really enjoyable.
Try to get the complete version uploaded, as I really enjoyed the first half and I'd love to see the second. Good luck!
yeah, thanks I was so pissed at flash when it stuffed up
This movie is incredible and is worthy of all the superlatives in the world.
The art direction is phenomenal. It looks like the movie has been influenced by German Expressionism and uses this style to devastating creative effect. There are so many parts that demonstrate this so well. For example, the part when the lights go out and tarboy is in the room with the insect-like robot.
The sound fits the movie perfectly, and is nothing short of epic. I especially love the piece when tarboy is melting. I'm actually tempted to buy the soundtrack....
The plot and the way it is arranged is also terrific. I love the way the granda robot is telling the story to the boy, and the twist that the granda robot is actually the janitor who kept the melted tarboy in a jar.
This is an incredibly creative and well-polished movie that is among the best I've ever seen. I recommend that everyone should watch it and discover the new phenomenon that is tarboy.
Roll on Tarboy 2!
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